There's a company (doesn't matter which) I encountered the other day that had just won a top 100 slot from a magazine in its space. A press release on its site announced the award—and quoted the company President: "This demonstrates our success as vertical enterprise experts in solving the essential challenges that are of vital nature to our customer's business."
OK. You're the reporter—who-what-where-when-why-how tip-to-toe—who gets this release. Read it again. Not a Who What Where When or Why in the litter, is there? Just squealing blather with zero news value. Since it doesn't satisfy the basic requirements of any press item, how could it ever get picked up?
And since, at least in that release, that was the President's sole "sound bite," what a complete opportunity waste for the company.
(And remember, this was the company's own press release. That quotation—massaged, discussed, tweaked, reviewed and authorized—was what they considered their best shot.)
I'm not picking on them at all: they're not alone. In fact, that's what you'll find most everywhere you look—online and offline: who knows, you might have a couple lying around yourself.
Approach This Marketplace Like a Marketer
At issue is not how to write better press releases. The real problem, and what this example is meant to underscore, is that we have failed to understand the nature of the marketplace we're dealing with, and we therefore don't deliver the product it wants. As a result, we're not achieving the results we expect from that marketplace.
Let's apply a very basic market framework to the question. Let's ask and answer three fundamental questions:
1. What is the marketplace?
The marketplace comprises people who succeed by appearing to be experts, or expert chroniclers. They are under stress. They compete with other organizations, and with their own colleagues. They have to be smart. And they have to be smart very quickly.
Companies are all the time doing just what you're trying to do in that marketplace: get their attention and generate some coverage. It's a buyer's market. If you want them to pay attention to your product, it has to be the right product.
While the content distributed to each differs, the press and analyst communities have much in common. They are in a very competitive business. First to publish—for both the press and the analyst community—wins.
And those reporters and analysts run a risk every time they publish so their decisions are based on how well they trust the source. And they are much more likely to publish something that they can cut and paste into an article or column than something they have to write or retype. Time is everything.
2. What is the product?