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I won't tell you more about the offer (want to see if you get that from the content!) but pretend you are the owner of "A1 Landscapers" based in Hunstville, AL.
Please let me know of any suggestions you have to improve the chances of success for this blast. I'm sorry the content is so long. If it makes it easier you can send replies back to me directly at richard@topservicepros.com.
Thanks,
Richard
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To: owner@a1landscapers.com
From: richard@TopServicePros.com
Subject: Listing A1 Landscapers on TopServicePros.com
Hello,
I think we can help A1 Landscapers get more high quality business in the Huntsville area!
TopServicePros.com is a nationwide on-line directory connecting homeowners to local home service professionals and home improvement contractors (check it out at https://www.TopServicePros.com). If you add A1 Landscapers to the directory, Huntsville area homeowners will find your company when searching for your type of service. You will even get to build a custom web page for A1 Landscapers, easily, with no programming involved! TopServicePros.com is by far the easiest way to get your company on the web and more importantly on a site that is targeted to Huntsville area homeowners that are actively looking for services like A1 Landscapers provides.
As you know, more and more people are using the internet as the first source to search for everything from movies to restaurants and even companies like A1 Landscapers. While we encourage you to have your own web site, it is often expensive and difficult to get an individual company web site to show up on search engine results. Because we have many companies listed and are building a popular community, we get many Huntsville area homeowner visits, and once on our web site we make it easy for them to find your company! The homeowner simply picks your service category and enters their zip code. If you are covering their zip code area, then A1 Landscapers will show up on the search results. The homeowner can then click through to see your custom web page and contact information!
The normal price for a basic listing is just $149/year but when I find companies like A1 Landscapers and send this personal email I like to offer a substantial discount. So if you enter the coupon code “0606adea” you will get a 50% discount on your first year's listing fee! But hurry because that discount code expires on June 30th.
You will not find an easier way to get A1 Landscapers on the web for less than $75. If you land just one job because of a referral from TopServicePros.com then the investment will have paid for itself! There are no other charges or “lead” fees, just the flat per year listing rate.
Some links of interest:
URLs deleted by staff Please read our FAQs and Important Guidelines – more information about the service, including instructions on how to log in live as a “demo” company to see how easy it is to edit your custom listing page by trying it yourself!
Please forward this message (including the 50% off coupon code) to your friends who may be interested in this service. If you are not interested in our service and want to remove yourself from my contact list then simply reply to this email with “remove” in the subject line. This email was sent to owner@a1landscapers.com.
Whether A1 Landscapers lists with us or not, I wish you the best success with your company.
Sincerely,
Richard Thoms
President - Top Service Pros, Inc.
Connecting Homeowners and Local Home Service Professionals
Homeowners, URLs deleted by staff
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